“The influence of Buddhism in Edo period in Japan”
The paper is going to be about “The influence of Buddhism in Edo period in Japan”. I already wrote a rough draft which is 5 pages of first insight. I would like you to add more detail on this paper such as 1, More direct and clear thesis statement on first paragraph. And explain what is the main idea of this essay. 2, Little bit more detail in introduction. 3, More detail info of relationship between Ukiyoe and Buddhism in Main body 1. (further more info of Buddhism perspective required) 4, More detail info of relationship between Haiku and Buddhism (I want to including the topics of dharma and karma. If its hard to add on this paragraph, you can add on different part of essay.) 5, More detail and clear conclusion on the last paragraph. I am international student so please be aware not using difficult and professional term on this essay. But it does not have to be too basic. Sources have to be from academic article, please use any type of academic article if you needed. I need to submit total 9-10 pages so please add 4-5 pages as a final version of essay.